Response to Comments and Feedback of our Finalised Ideas

Generally, throughout the class, people liked our ideas and our storyline. But many people feel we lacked certain things like music and detail in our ideas. People have said we need to write more about our shots, props and we could add some sound effects. The other groups have said that we have met the thriller conventions which is good to know we have achieved what we set out to do. They have also commented on how effective our credits will be and if they will be achievable, as we aim to have the title pop out of the screen.