0-10 secs - A 180* pan shot of a passing train, on the nearby railway tracks, into a 360* tracking shot of Saul with Will in the background at points.
11-20 secs - Jump shot to Will , from Saul, with a, choppy, stop-motion, zoom into Will's eyes.
21-30 secs - Strobe flash into Will's 1st flashback which will be in black and white and from Will's POV . Will will be getting pushed into a cupboard by his scared brother, Hakan.
Hakan:- "quickly, quickly get in here", (leading will to a cupboard)
31-40 secs - Flashes back from Will's eyes into the scene with a 360* tacking shot of Will and Saul sitting.
41-50 secs - Zoom into Will's eyes, again, with the, choppy stop motion, technique but this time canting the angle until zoom is full and eyes are shot is upside down.
51-60 secs - Will's 2nd, black and whit flashback, is again shot from a POV of Will inside a cupboard hiding and looking through a small slit in the cupboard. Saul and Hakan arguing and POV only able to see the legs of Saul and Hakan
Saul:- (walking through the door holding a gun by his side) "Where's my money"
Hakan:- "I dont know what your talking about man"
Saul:- (lifting gun(gun going off screen)) "you know exactly what im talking about"
Hakan:- "Seriously I aint got a clue" (Saul shoots Hakan)
61-70 secs - Flashback in black and white continues and Hakan gets shot POV hears the gun shot but doesnt see it and then POV turns to canted angle when Hakan falls to the ground, in slow motion. Ending up with a canted angle shot of, dead, Hakan lying.
71-80 secs - Flashes out of the black and white flashback into the real time scene with Will and Saul sitting on chairs. There is then a tense scene of Will staring at Saul, who is sitting there, tied up, with blood and bruises all over.
81-90 secs - Will slowly stands from his chair and walks towards Saul un-wrapping bandage wrapped around his knuckles.
91-100 secs - Will grabs Saul's face by the jaw. Credits for Will appear along the line of his arm.
Will:- "your a dead man"
101-110 secs - Will punches Saul, and credit shoots across the screen. He hits him around the jaw and Saul's head swings to the side and he spits out blood. Slow motion comes in and Credits pop up where Saul spat, quickly shooting off.
111-120 secs - The screen really slowly fades out with Will still staring at Saul and then screen flashes to the title of REPENDO popping up on screen.
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- Add in extra details such as props and music and more detail on shot types (for example mid shot for Will grabbing Saul's face.).
- We think you have understood lighting well and get a clear idea from your terminology.
It meets the thriller convention with the action involved however it could be improved by shot types, sound effects and music. Your thriller sounds very action packed and interesting, good luck.
Feedback - p3-72
ReplyDeleteWe think that it has a good storyline, you've described the camera angles well.
One problem is that you haven't described the props. or the setting, and haven't really described the storyline.
There are an antagonist and protagonist.
you can tell that its a crime psychological thriller because the audience is aware of the antagonist from the start which is a crime convention.
However lots of the film is on a mental level.
Add more detail to each 10 seconds, props, setting, sound.
We think that your credit ideas are really creative as are the black and white shots. the shots are well thought out. when filming make sure the punches are realistic and effective without causing a lot of damage. we liked the POV shot however we think it will be quite difficult to film
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